Not the First

Not the First
EP. 20 Free Falls


"Mas....," cried Rey who surprised all the residents of the house. He was still half lying on the bed, while his hand held HP.


Wibie who had already woken up and was enjoying Oma's coffee in the family room while watching the morning news immediately stood up from her seat and fled to the room.


Oma, Ardi and Devara who heard the screams also immediately scattered into the room.


"What's wrong?" ask Wibie to panic.


"See this! Why is this so?" rey asked frantically while showing some of his stores in some well-known marketplaces.


"What?" tanya Wibie was still confused by the intent of his wife's question.


"Look, Mas. The stars all went down. From the range of 48 to 49 has now been freefall. Everything's under 2.5,"


"Look again, why many comments on goods are not on order, the seams are tight, hot materials, not in accordance with the picture, and negative sentences that dropped the market," shouted Rey again so upset.


"Prophey, Istighfar first. Don't freak. Let me see,"


Wibie and Ardi who were already in the room observed what Rey was complaining about. It is true that the comment was made by several accounts because if viewed from one store with another, the name of the account owner is-that's it. If calculated there are about 30 accounts with similar comments,"


"Why is this?" wibie asked her sister-in-law.


Ardi shook his head doubtfully, as if he wanted to say something but he himself was not sure if his opinion was correct.


"Try clicking one of the accounts, Mas," Wibie followed what Ardi said. He clicked on one of the accounts called Sayla with the comment "The stuff is very different from the photo, the material is rough, the seams are tenuous,"


"Tuh, looks comment he is not only in Laku-Laku, but there is in the Best Selling, and Panda Shop. The account wrote several reviews on Rey's online store at one time,"


Said Ardi again.


"So how is this? I might have trouble getting new customers,"


"Patience, Brother. Let's think about how to do it,"


"Bug," asked Wibie


"Not Mas, if the bug human error of the information system, but this is different. Some deliberately create a fake account with the intention of lowering the store rating so that prospective buyers have a poor assessment of the products sold by the store. Eventually a potential customer or existing customer will rethink for the transaction again,"


"Oh, yes. Understand me," Wibie muttered while thinking of something.


"That's so bad for people. How evil is really the same Rey," exclaimed Oma who has since listened to what is discussed by Ardi and Wibie. Beside him was Devara who stroked his mother's shoulder.


"We go back first yuk. Let Ardi and Wibie take care of it. I hope nothing happens,"


Rey followed Oma's advice. He got up from his bed and stepped into the kitchen. Devara and Oma followed him from behind.


"As someone shouted, who is Oma?" pras asked who appeared from the side door.


"Rey, there's this online store,"


"Well, what's the story?" tanyanya.


"That's Ardi and Wibie in the room. Come in," Oma pointed to Wibie's room, which remained wide open.


After Pras got an explanation from Wibie, just immediately nyerocos ga karuan.


"This must be something fun, deliberately making Rey's business thin trust so close the online business. There are likely two, if not competition between fellow business people there must be someone who is vengeful Rey,"


When mentioning the word "sudge" suddenly remembered Mr. Gun and immediately his gaze was fixed on Wibie.


"I don't think he's going to be that happy, what he's doing all this for. I'd rather believe the first reason,"


"What's wrong, Mom?" asked Ardi , because he did not understand what was meant in the talk of his brother-in-law was the same Pras.


Wibie tells about Mr. Gun to Ardi in detail so that he can draw conclusions after hearing his explanation.


"I agree with Mas Wibie, it seems too far away if he does something like this,"


"What?" wibie asked with her worried face.


"When the shaman, the man dares to wring Rey's hand. Besides them, there was me and one regular student. In the open, in front of the cooperative," Pras explained with emotion.


"Rey didn't tell me about it,"


"Maybe he's worried that you're gonna do something else to Mr. Gun,"


"What happened after that night he never contacted Rey again" asked Ardi.


"Eitherway. Since then, Rey always turns off her phone if it's 9. I don't know, noon,"


"I have a very fond face cremes," grumbled Pras gereget. He really does not like men who like to tease women who are married.


"That's it, we can think about later. The important thing is how to make Rey not sad anymore. This online venture pioneered him from scratch, ever since he started working as my assistant back then. He enjoyed this job and the results were good. That's why knowing this is as mysterious as that" explains Wibie.


"We report to each CS for a while. While waiting I will contact a friend of the office, he understands more about webside and this business," said Pras.


"Good idea too. While that's all we can do" said Ardi chimed in.


"Yes already. Hope the business is over soon. Kasian, he," muttered Wibie who also felt how sad Rey was.


"Break breakfast first" asked Oma.


At the dinner table already sits sweet Devara and Dhiza. While Witha was still in the bathroom because all night was out fighting with her opponent who was so tough.


"Yes, Oma," said Wibie.


The three men immediately came out and joined at the dining table. Witha who had just finished taking a bath also sat down, by her husband's side.


"Ga dawn prayer?"


"Worse, you are" she whispered as she pinched her husband's stomach.


Because Pras and Dhiza began to be suspicious of their whispers, Witha did not continue her scolding to Pak Husband. Though he was so upset with Ardi, once the man had finished channeling his passion, he let Vitha lie in his own room. He returned to the sofa and could sleep soundly even though the mosquitoes disturbed his audience.


"Damn it, I got bad luck no one mbagunin," he grumbled again.


"Udah Rey, let's have breakfast first. Let the men in this house finish your online store, come on. It takes energy to be able to think clearly," Oma reminded Rey who still looks sad over the events that have happened to her.


"Yes, in Mas Pras' office there is an IT expert, tar can ask him for help. Perhaps there was a solution," Dhiza tried to calm her husband's best friend.


"Come, it starts. Why on bengong. Pras, Wibie, Ardi, let's get the rice first. This is a typical mom's meal. Rawon typical of Surabaya,"


"Salt eggs buy. I can't make it myself" continued the mother again.


"Well, it smells good Oma. Especially the taste," Pras chimed in.


"Yes, start. Don't pepper the cocksucker,"


Without waiting for another order, Pras filled his plate with a barrel of rice and then poured with rawon that is still bubbling. After added with sambal gerus and salted eggs, the dish was eaten without any leftover.


So did the others, seeing Pras so eager to enjoy his breakfast, they became hungry. In an instant the cuisine of Oma ludes was invaded by her children, daughter-in-law, and grandchildren.


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